Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Steampunk novel - "The Uninvited"

Another small excerpt from my Steampunk themed novel.


The door chime roused Edmund from his thought, like the snap of a therapist’s fingers.  His eyes quickly opened, his pupils dilated, absorbing his surroundings.  His senses were immediately calibrated.  Placing his hands on the armrests of his chair, he slowly lifted himself to his feet.  He paused to adjust his vest, removed his pocket watch by its chain and observed the time.  Nineteen at the forty second.  He replaced his time piece, walked across the salon and stopped at the iron bypass station.  He found the valve with brass lettering above it saying, “Hull” and gave it two turns to the left.  The copper pipes hissed to life as the steam flowed from the bypass station to the heavy, iron door at the other end of the salon.  The iron gears above the door creaked to life, working together to move the massive structure away from the passageway.  Patiently waiting at the threshold stood 3 men; two behind the third, flanking him on either side.
            “Impressive!” exclaimed the man in front.  He was a slender, gaunt individual with dirty blonde hair, hidden by a grey tall hat with a lavender band.  “What a brilliant construct you have there, sir.”  His lips parted into a forced smile that unveiled a mouthful of yellowish teeth with gaps between them large enough to reveal the silver tongue caged within.  “Permission to enter the premises, my lord.”  He said with a hint of a bow.
            “Granted” returned Edmund.
            The thin fellow took two steps into Edmund’s den and stopped.  His eyes briefly surveyed the ceiling and walls on either side before his gaze affixed on Edmund.  His eyes as grey as his hat and just as soulless.
            “I assume you were expecting my good coming?”  The thin man questioned.
            “I was not.”  Edmund lied.
            “And yet you open your hull without the forknowledge of what may lay in wait?  You surprise, my lord.  You should take more care to whom you open your hearth to.” said the thin man.
            “I was unaware my wellbeing was in peril, sir.  Perhaps you are in the company of whisperings to which I have yet to be acquainted.” Said Edmund.
            “Please, sir.  I do not presume to suggest impending danger is upon, rather I warn against such carelessness.  We live in a troubling era in an unpredictable metropolis, where unwary citizens are disappearing faster with each passing hour.  And with the elections briskly approaching, the populace seems to be sprinting to the grave.”  The thin man said with a smirk.

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